malfectus

-General Information-
Name:malfectus
Age:17
Race:human
Deity:
Class and level:barbarian lvl 1
Alignment:cg
Physical Description: about 6.2 burly, brown hair, green eyes scars on the palms of each hand, and tan.
Personality:hates people who pray on the weak and sickly, believes that the law does not help bring justice only people who are will to take action to bring justice do. hot headed.
History: When i was 13 my village was destroyed I am the only survivor. After that I meet the man who trained me into the barbarian I am so i can get justice.
-Game Stats-
Attributes:
Strength: 16(+3)
Dexterity: 12(+1)
Constitution: 13(+1)
Intelligence: 12(+1)
Wisdom: 13(+1)
Charisma: 13(+1)

Combat stats:
Hit Points: 13
Armor Class: 14
Touch Armor Class: 11
Flat-footed Armor Class: 13
Damage Reduction: 0
Spell Resistance: 0
Initiative: 1
Speed:40
Base Attack Bonus:1
Grapple Modifier:4

Saves:
Fortitude: +3
Reflex: 0
Will: 0
Spell: DC Mod
Arcane Spell Failure: (for arcane casters only, depends on armor)

Skills Template:
Name-Key Ability-Total Modifier-Ranks-total skill.
climb: str : +3 : 4 = 7
craft: int: +1: 0 = 1
handle animal: cha: +1: 5= 6
jumb; str: +3: 1= 4
listen: wis: +1: 5 =6
ride: dex: +1:0=1
swim: str: +3: 1= 4
survival: wis 3=4
(example: Appraise-Int-5-4-1)

Languages:
comon, elvin
Feats:weapon focus ( greataxe)
combat reflexes

Special Abilities:
berserker strength
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-Inventory-
Weapons Template:
Name greataxe
Attack Bonus+1
Damage1d12+4
Critical x3
Range
Type slashing
Notes two handed

Armor Template:
Name:studded leather
Type: light
AC Bonus:+3
Max Dex Bonus:+5
Check Penalty:-1
Arcane Spell Failure:15%
Speed:30
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Other possesions:
Name: backpack with one days trails rations, waterskin, bedroll, sack and flint and steel.
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GP:8
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Current Experience: 0

Hello,
Thank you for your interest in the RP. Right now as I'm reading over your profile, I'd like to make a few comments. I like your physical description, and I think that the character concept is a good one with some interesting twists. Unfortunately, there are a few issues that need addressing before you can be approved.

First of all, basic grammar and punctuation. I'm not asking for formal writing style, but using capitals at the beginning of sentences and running a spell-check before you post are essential, both for yourself and for our readability. It's very difficult to approve a profile when it is almost unreadable.

Second of all, the history is a series of events that help determine your character's personality. Why is he the way he is? Why does he believe that the law helps people, even though he is chaotic good in alignment? Try to come up with events that answer this. You do not need to describe each one in such detail and write them out, either. If you do, please use quotation marks to denote speech and keep it separate from the actions. It makes things more readable.


If you can get two or three events in his history, correct the spelling errors and insert quotation marks where they are necessary, then we can approve this profile.

Thank you!

this recieves the Bobly seal of approval. (make sure in the future you use spell check)